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Showing posts with label Writing 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2018. Show all posts

Friday, 14 September 2018

The Special and Wonderful Key

Walt write creative stories about pictures
The Special And Wonderful Key

Adam was still looking for it. He was really worried. He didn’t know what to do.
Luckily he had been training to be a detective. He searched everywhere. He
couldn’t find the key. “Now no one will ever trust me again!” He yelled
“Well could you at least have a rest.” His sister said
The sisters name is Adriana. Adriana is 15 years old. She was very popular in
her school. She wants to be a singer when she grows up. She loves to sing and
she is also a very good singer. They both have an older brother. His name is Aj.
Aj loves having a little brother. Aj is 19 years old. He is a normal teenager. He is
in college. He very tall. The dads name is Joe. He is 45 years old. He is a great
author. He writes stories about his family. He is a very nice dad. Their mums
name is Michelle. The mum was 35 years old. She died when Adam was born.
She had cancer when Adam was born and she got very sick and died. She
would never growl at anyone. She never got to see Adam grow up.

Adams cousins are Melissa, Malakai and Mitch. Melissa is 14 years old.
She is a bit like Adriana. Her parents died when Mitch was born. Malakai is
17 years old. He is also a bit like Aj. Mitch is 11 years old. He is the same age
as Adam. He is a very sensitive boy. He cries easily so no one would want to
hurt him. Melissa, Malakai and Mitch all are now living with Adam and his
family. The dad says that it is not that much work with 6 kids in the house.
Malakai had a very special key. He went up to Adam and gave him a key.
He said “Please keep this safe. My father gave to me. He said whoever has
it is a responsible person. So just keep it safe while I am at camp. I don’t
want you to lose it.”
“I will keep it safe.” Adam continued “I will do my best. I will not lose it.”
“Thank you” Malakai said
So Malakai only trusted Adam. Then one day Adam had lost it. He was
so worried. Only three more days until Malakai was back. He lost it by
having so much fun and he forgot all about the key. He looked in all the
rooms like the kitchen his bedroom he looked in all the bedrooms also
he looked under the house. and he also searched the attic. But he
couldn’t find anything.


It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had
held in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have
disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes! He heard someone
knocking on the front door. He knew it was Malakai. He was really scared.
He ran to his room and told Mitch. Mitch didn’t want to help or listen to
Adam. Adam was so stressed out. He didn’t know what to do. Then his
dad had opened the door for him. Adam ran as quickly as he could to his
room. Malakai went to Adams room and found Adam. He asked “So where
is the key?”
“Umm oh hi. How was camp?”
“It was good. So did you keep the key safe?”
“Sit down. Umm so what did you eat?”
“Why do you keep on changing the subject?”
“I can’t tell you.”
“Just give me the key!” Malakai yelled
“The truth is that I was so busy that I forgot all about the key and I
lost it.” Adam Said
“Well you could off just told me.” Malakai said annoyed
“Sorry I didn’t know what to say. But I will buy you a brand new one
that is exactly the same.”
“You are ok but I have to say call everyone to come and search for
it now!’’
Malakai yelled
So Adam called everyone and they all searched for the key. Adriana
was looking in the kitchen and she finds the key. She yells and says
“Malakai I found it!”
“Where are you?”
“In the kitchen!” She yells back
“Thank you. This is a key that no one is ever trusted with.” He said
A few months later Malakai and his siblings have been horrible so Adam’s
dad sends them to an orphanage. They are so miserable because they all
grew up together.

And that is the end of the story.

Friday, 24 August 2018

The Other Side Of The World

Walt: Create this myth or legend based on this picture.

On the other side of the world
On the other side of the world there is a weird world. In this world everyone has to do the right thing.
If someone does something bad the whole world gets punished.One time this girl was was walking
and she threw her rubbish on the ground. The next day there was burning fires everywhere. Lucky I
haven’t done anything bad at all. Today I’m going to this museum with amazing pictures. So when I
got there I ran right in because I knew that they put new pictures up. So I went in and I went to the
myths and legends room, there was a lot of pictures. We were allowed to touch them. I kept on
walking until I saw this most amazing picture. It was a picture of a world being destroyed by
rocks shaped like giants wrecking everything. Then there was a man on a horse with a flag.
It looked so cool. I touched the picture and suddenly I was inside the picture. Someone outside
the picture looked at me and I was moving. She saw me and screamed that I was moving.
“Stop moving, or our picture is going to be thrown into the bin.” The rock man said

But the picture got thrown into the bin. Just than the rock man started destroying everything
and he was also looking for me to kill me. I didn’t notice but he had a brother that helped me
hide. The brother was a nice guy but the older brother wasn’t. They started fighting because the
brother didn’t want me to get hurt and the older brother really wanted to kill me. So I stopped them.
I don’t like when families fight so I said to the older brother that we could all be friends and nothing
would happen bad. He agreed with me. So I lived in the picture and we were all friends. So that was
my legend that I told you.


Friday, 17 August 2018

What I've Been Waiting For

Walt be creative in our stories that we write.

Once I got home I got my key out and unlocked the door. I opened the door and when
I looked up to see my house it was a dark dark world. I didn’t understand why my house
was supposed to be like this. I went to the lounge. What I saw was a disgusting gross
pond with trees beside it. Then I remembered my room so I quickly ran to my room
and my room was this pitch black cave. I started to worry. I ran to the door but my
door was gone. I yelled for help so many times that I realised that I was out in a dark
world and no one could hear me. I walked around just then I heard a roar. I looked behind
me and it was a tiger. I was scared, so scared. He said “Don’t be scared I can help you
with whatever you want” He said
I didn’t talk but the tiger said “Follow me”
So I did follow him. He led me into the cave. I went in. The tiger had a light with him and
gave it to me so that I could turn it on. We walked, the tiger got a little scared so he said
to me always ladies first. I don’t know if he just wanted me to go in front but I do know
tigers can be scared of dark. So I went in front of the tiger and he was really scared.
We stopped. There was two tunnels to go through. I said “How about this. You go
through the left tunnel and I will go through the right tunnel.”
He said “No I am not going alone through that tunnel.”
“Why not?” I asked
“Because I’m not a man or a human I’m a tiger! Can you not see  I am a tiger that is
a scared tiger.” He yelled
“Excuse me what?” I asked
“Why don’t humans ever understand” The tiger whispered
“So you just wasted ten minutes yelling at me!” I yelled
“I’ll go myself and don’t even bother to follow me” I said
So I went to see what was all the way back in the cave. I got there and there was
a colourful park. “I had to come here for this!” I yelled

But I played on the playground for 2 hours. I see this button and press it. Then the world
goes back to normal. THE END