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Wednesday 23 October 2019

Willow Weavers

Walt unpack sentences faster.
In class for our reading task as you know we have been posting information webs. This time I got a teacher to go through my work before I posted it to see if I wrote enough information. I also got two other students to see if there was enough information. One of them said its good. The other said that I just need to make sure I don't repeat.

Here is my mindmup:
Let me know if there is anything I need to work on!

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 10:29

    Hey Talia!

    I love your work. I love how you have enough information in each paragraph and not hundreds and hundreds of information! I think you have nothing to improve on and this is perfect.

    Bye

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    1. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 10:31

      Thank you for commenting! I think you did great on your information web too.

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