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Thursday, 28 November 2019

The Stag

For reading this week we have a story called The Stag. We had a task that was to make a trap for the stag without having to kill it by shooting it. My idea was to make a big hole big enough for the stag and when it falls into the hole it will make a  noise to attract help then you will know that my plan has worked.

Here is a Demonstration:

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  1. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:48

    Hey Talia!

    This idea is really awesome! I never thought of making a hole for it to fall into and I thought it was creative how you said that it will make a noise and that will attract attention so that you know if you've caught it as well!

    Something I also saw is that you've written it in black so that it it more easier to see and that's great as well but it was kind of hard for me to see the trap part but either than that this is great!

    Ka Pai To Mahi! (Your Work Is Great!)
    ¬Siale

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    1. Anonymous29 November 2019 at 09:17

      Hi Siale,

      Thank you for your feedback. Next time I'll probally draw the trap a bit more with detail.

      I could see that the picture I put onto my blog was a bit blury. I'll make it clear next time.

      Thanks for commenting!

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