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Tuesday, 14 November 2017

Animal poetry

Walt write a poem about our favourite animal


Animal Poetry By Talia
I like Birds
Ask me why?
Because they can fly,
Because their nest is high up in the sky.
Because their smaller,
Because they are smaller but others are taller.
Because they are blue and brown,
Because they never fall to the ground.
Because their eyes are blue,
Because they never catch a flue.
Because they are awake in the light,
Because their never awake at night.
Because they have wings,
Because they always sing.
That’s why i like Birds

2 comments:

  1. Hi Talia,
    My name is Kalafi and I'm a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's School. Your Poetry was fantastic. I really think you have achieved what you said in your WALT by making a poem about your favourite bird. I was wondering if it was difficult thinking of rhyming words? What is your favourite type of bird. I can't wait till your next post.

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  2. HI Kalafi, Thank you for your comment. It was quite hard to think of rhyming words. My favourite type of bird is fan bird.

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