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I was a student at St Bernadette’s Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 30 August 2019
Sheep and Ant
In class for writing we got put into groups. This was for a writing activity that we were to do. It was to make a slideshow and we got given a character, settings, problem for our story from our teacher. We had to come up with our own solution. Our problem was that there was an ant that was alergic to trees and the settings was in a jungle. Our characters were an ant and a sheep. I picked the sheep because I couldn't stp thinking of an sheep. We had one slide each to do. There was four people in our group it was Liam, Myself, Tini and Tyler. I got to pick who I wanted in my group and it was Liam. I picked Liam because he had a creative mind.
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Hi Talia, I am Olivia. I just love the idea of what you choose to blog about. I love how you have choose those people to be in your group.Are you atchley a year 5 because that is a lot of writing. Great I like the way you presented it in a slide. What was your favorite part of the process. Great work.
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Hi there Talia! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow! I love the way you gave us a clear explanation of why you decided to post this blog. But, a small mishap, I couldn't read your writing! It was way to TINY!
So next time please make the words bigger if you can!
How long did it take you to write this?
From Hana
Kia Ora Talia My name is Alvin from yms I liked the way you decribed the ant and the sheep. did you think about making the writing a bit bigger?. how come you wroteabout this what gave you this idea?
ReplyDeletehow did you two have a good combination?