For cybersmart we have been doing a challenge. So we had to make a google drawing about anything to convince others to comment on our blog. So I wrote poems about seasons and sports.
So please leave me a comment and if you do comment on my post I will go to your blog and comment on your post.
I was a student at St Bernadette’s Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 11 September 2018
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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kia ora taila it is me Jordan I like your poem next time you could add how you did it and seps how to teach kids how to write a poem like yours and do a pitcure of showing ho to teach kids to do it
ReplyDeletebye bye
_ Jordan
Hi Jordan, Thank you for your comment. Thank you for the helpful sentences. Next time I maybe will teach others about the poems. Thanks
ReplyDeleteDo you know what type of name is the poem?