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Thursday, 12 September 2019

The Machine

In class for our reading task we are doing our group task independently. We do it on our own but comment on each others blogs once we have put it onto our blog. This week we had to do a story map. I did my story map on a mindmup. This is what we have been doing for this week in our reading sessions. I forgot to put the solution. It was that what Billy wanted to invent was already invented.
Here is my Mindmup:

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  1. Anonymous12 September 2019 at 10:11

    Kia Ora Talia, I think that your post is amazing it is really well set out you have the right amount of information and you have taken your feedback and used it. I just think you could be a bit more specific like what door did the open and push Billy through?
    Kind regards,
    Greer

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